My thoughts:
‘At that time, it was nearly impossible to to get them to try any food that had spice in it. Curry was out of the question when they had trouble with even the black pepper at McDonald’s, which has no kick.’
I like the way it’s phrased:) if they can’t even take the spiciness of pepper, which is practically nothing compared to curry, how could they consume anything spicy?
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‘It marked the completion of the journey from mac and cheese to mee pok.’
Rephrase it as ‘Today marked the completion of the journey from Bio noob to Bio expert’ XD
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